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9 hours, 57 minutes, and 4 seconds.

That was how long the platinum blonde had been sitting against the wall, living in his thoughts, a bottle of vodka held loosely in his hand. He'd first gotten into the alcoholic drink when he found out it was big sister Russia's favorite. She had been his obsession at the time, and thus, he'd done whatever he could to forge a connection with her.

 Of course, she wasn't his obsession now, but his addiction to vodka wasn't going to fade away anytime soon. And the fact that he couldn't stop thinking about you certainly wasn't helping. His chest tightened as he thought about you.

 You were his current obsession, and the reason why he was drunk on his ass.

Ironically, it was because of his old obsession that he met you.

Several days ago.......

Belarus silently sharpened his knife, his eyes narrowed into dangerous slits. He'd heard from Lithuania that big sister Russia was coming home from the world meeting- and was bringing another girl with her.

Well, Belarus certainly didn't like that one bit. He was the jealous type, to say the least, and he hated it when other people were around his big sister. It didn't matter if it was a boy or a girl, Belarus would make sure he/she would meet his/her painful demise- by his own hand. Or his knife, if you wanted to get technical.

He heard the front door open and demonic hatred twisted the platinum blond's normally handsome features. He stuffed the knife in one of his large pockets and stalked over to the door. Standing there was his beautiful older sister, Russia, and you- although, he would admit, you were rather pretty as well.

A look of fear crossed his big sister's face. "H-Hello, little brother Belarus."

The Belarusian didn't bother with formalities, nor did he care that you were standing there- he was going to ask, dammit! "Marry me, big sister." He grabbed her shoulders roughly, leaving purple bruises.

The Russian shook her head, angering the already pissed of Belarusian. "Marry me!"

 "That's enough!" You said roughly, crossing your arms over your chest, your eyes narrowed. "What the hell is wrong with you?!" You heard about this guy from Russia-Chan, and you found what he was doing ridiculous.

 The platinum blond turned to look at you, but instead of receiving the poisonous look you'd expected to get, you got a look of surprise. Belarus wasn't used to anyone telling him things like that; everyone was terrified of what he might do if they did. Not even his strong big sister dared to fight him and treated him with upmost respect and fear. Yet you had the nerve to stand tall and tell him off.

The platinum blond wasn't sure if he should be impressed or pissed.

 You pushed him away from Russia, then grabbed her hand. "C'mon, Russia-Chan! Let's go talk somewhere else." You shot the platinum blond a glare before leaving, pulling the relieved Russian behind you.

The Belarusian watched your retreating figure, a twisted smile gracing his terrifying features. You were certainly strong, and he liked that.

 He liked that a lot.


You had become his new obsession. He didn't try anything at first, he just watched you for a whole. The more he saw you, the more he became fascinated. You were a rather serious, no nonsense person, yet when you smiled you looked so innocent. He wanted that smile, wanted it to be his and his alone.

 As with his previous obsession, he was becoming more and more possessive. He tried to keep you away from his big sister, and he could tell it was irritating you. "Belarus, stop it!"

 He looked at you, trying to appear bored and rather uninterested in the current topic, whatever it was. "What are you talking about?"

You narrowed your eyes. "Don't give me that bullshit. I'm not stupid, I've noticed you trying to keep me away from Russia-Chan. Look, I know you've got this obsessed crush on her, but it's starting to get ridiculous."

 The effect your words had were pretty unexpected; before you could blink, the Belarusian slammed you against the wall, causing you to wince. He held both of your hands over your head and slid a foot between your legs, leaving you completely helpless. An unearthly silence filled the room as he became aware of your heart beating louder and faster.

 He moved his mouth to your ear. "You just don't get it, do you?" You shivered; his breath was ice cold. He whispered two words that would haunt you forever.

 "Marry me."


Ten hours. It had just hit the ten hour mark. He'd been sitting here for ten fucking hours, getting drunk.

 Of course, he could have recalled more, but he didn't need to; he knew damn well what happened from there.

You left.

 But, really, what did he expect? Like big sister Russia, you didn't really understand the depths of his passion. Unlike big sister, however, he had no idea where you lived; he didn't even know what country you were from. That, of course, could be easily changed with a threat of his knife and the cowardice of Lithuania.

 Well, he certainly wasn't going to let you go; you were his current obsession, after all. It didn't really matter if you loved him back or not. An insane giggle escaping his lips, he threw the vodka bottle at the ground, causing it to shatter.

It didn't matter one bit.


I've been writing for America and England a bit too much, so I thought I'd try doing a few other countries. But this......this was such a fail. :iconfailureplz:

COMMENT! ........Please?
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Rachelloveshetalia Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Student Writer
I need mooooooooooooore
WuerdGirl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Student General Artist
More!!!!! Pleaseeee
amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student Writer
*Looks all over the world (Literally)* Where part two? I can't find it
Germanyfan123321 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
I loved it!!.....I wouldn't have ran away from him though o.o
Lunagreyfiresoul Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Part 2 please. And hooray for InSaNiTy
xXBlueChuXx Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Needed a part 2!!!
AlysTheWolf Featured By Owner Edited Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This was not a fail!
venblack1398 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014  Hobbyist
Yay Insanity!
dancechamp520 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this was not a fail
ninaanima Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
More~ Please?~
GamerGirl0002 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Three words PART TWO PLEASEFree Luna icon 
Bokukokhmer Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
/(*^*)/ please continue
Ayumi-Haruka Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Oh don't be a negative it's a very good story kaomoji set 1 9/19 
SwissMuMuCows Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
This was so good~! But scary……THIS WAS TO GOOD! YOU DIDN'T FAIL!
animelover-8 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But I love Nikolia and ill gladly be his and he doesn't have to fight :3
BlueCATthe1andonly Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really want another part of this, it would be awesome because this is such an awesome story.
AlisSparrow Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Student Writer
Awesome. :3
kksfriend1000 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool! I love the eerie feel.
DoruDesux1 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lullibyy23254 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought it was cool!
13th-Program Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Student General Artist
only that?! MOOORE!!!! X3
skittlesxnom Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this was beautiful i promise~~~ :iconoldschoolownedplz:
BinkuMuja Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
Uh-oh, someone is on the warpath. That can not possibly end well for anyone involved....
haleyboplucy Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh llama shit, i feel like I'm being stalked. (Looks behind me) nothing there. (Turns around and keeps playing harvest moon on my psp. (Nyo Belarus looks into my small window. Nyo Belarus: marry me marry me marry me
Me: (turns around) I'm really getting freaked out now.
( I really love nyo Belarus. I'm just not too big on stalkers since a lot I my male classmates apparently stalked me all year without me noticing according to ALL of my friends. It apparently happens a lot but I don't know how. I'm hardly attractive in my opinion)
shadowrider327 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Iwantcandy987 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
AmuletAmethyst Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't give me that bullshit. This wasn't a fail. It was freaking amazing. So get up and WRITE MORE!! 

NekodaTheHedgehog86 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
More please!
lilymath Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
WoW         I love it :D
FuzzyAlly Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter

THIS AINT NO PRISSY ASS FAIL ( I'm so drunkkk whe ee)
Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Are you a denmark drunk or a german drunk
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Seems legit.
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
ctuie mrksss"
Ime gte soem...
Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh god you are a Danish drunk
Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
you caught me when I was drunk.
D: I'm forever humiliated.
Elisavetaawesome12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student General Artist
its okay ;) i won't tell!
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The-Neglected-Youth Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
What happens next?
I-am-number-10 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
This is the opposite of a fail, much less an epic one. :iconletmehugyouplz: Sequel? Pretty please?
cassie6291 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student General Artist
Epic. Givegetcenter-dance 
HoodieSlenderverse Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me after reading the story: :iconoldschoolownedplz:
SilviaET Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
 Watch me fail (at a icon) --> :iconletmehugyouplz: You on the other hand, did not fail at writing/typing
dark-winged-kitsune Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS WASEN"T A FAIL!! WE ALL LOVED IT!!! :iconletmehugyouplz::iconoldschoolownedplz:
Katarenna Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG!! Ty for the part two I just found it after stalking your page!!:iconletmehugyouplz:
Shadowpawlovesanime Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
Misako & Katsumi: THIS WASN'T A FAIL!! WE LOVE IT!!! :iconoldschoolownedplz:
KiraYukina Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Despite the fact that he's stalking me, I like a good fight *cracks knuckles*
hannah12987 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I already have 2 real life stalkers and know I have a dream stalker........ I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!
loveDAYloveNIGHT Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013
the title should be: Male!Psycho!Belarus. 'Cuz seriously! I love the way you show his obsession. I love it! ^u^
Valentina21 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
I love it!! c: Part 2?
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